The Refund Line That Sells More
Give the Work Away First: How Free Builds the Trust That Sells — Same mechanic as today’s drill: lower the buyer’s risk first, the sale gets easier. The long version, with the giveaway math worked out.
The Refund Line That Sells
A buyer with their cursor on your button is running risk math. Run it for them.
You’re going to write a refund policy a stranger trusts in one read, plant it next to the buy button, and lock in a rule to honor it inside a day. Costs nothing to set up. It pulls more people across the line to buy. Here’s the drill.
1 // Write the line in plain English
Three sentences, no legalese: what you refund, how long they have, how to ask. Mine reads: ‘Not happy? Email me inside 30 days and I refund you in full. No questions, no form.’ Write yours so a tired person at 11pm gets it on the first read. If it needs a footnote, cut it down.
2 // Put it on the product page, near the button
Not buried in a Terms page nobody opens. Paste it under the buy button, where the doubt lives. On Gumroad: edit the product, drop the line into the description as its own short paragraph so it reads like a promise and not fine print. Doubt and answer on the same screen.
3 // Set your honor standard before anyone asks
Set the rule now, before any money is on the line. Standard: every refund request gets processed within 24 hours, in full, no asking why. On Gumroad that’s Sales, find the order, hit Refund. Two clicks. A grudging refund three days late does more damage than no policy at all.
4 // Run the wording past a non-buyer
Send the line to one person who hasn’t bought from you. Ask one question: ‘Reading this, do you feel safe clicking buy?’ If they hesitate or fire back a follow-up, the wording is doing the opposite of its job. Cut whatever made them pause, send it again, repeat until the answer is a flat yes.
The standard: a refund honored fast costs less than a chargeback and a one-star review. Track the rate for a month. Hold it under one in ten orders and you’re fine. Climb past that and the problem is the product, not the policy, and that’s a different drill.
Write the line today. On the page before you sleep. Honor the next request inside a day.
What’s your refund window right now, and have you ever dragged your feet on honoring one? Hit reply and tell me. I read every one. ~ J.D.
End of brief · the tower is warm